Hi Leah

Hi Leah,

I want to work with you to make this blog something that you are really proud to show your parents. I thought it interesting that you were reluctant to share and that made me curious. I suspect that it's not because you have personal information posted but maybe because you feel like they would be disappointed with what they saw?

I think that's really unfortunate. You have many posts which is a good sign that you are trying to do well. I do feel like we have some work to do yet, but I think we can get you writing a 4 paragraph opinion piece by the time we are done the course.

I spent some time trying to help you understand what the opinion essay was all about. Did I leave you confused about anything? The best way for you to get good at this is for you to write several and get me to comment on them for you.

Can you please let me know when you are finished the opinion essay so I can comment on it? I haven't seen anything so far that looks like it's 4 paragraphs. But please, don't struggle with this all by yourself. Ask me any questions you can. I'll do what I can to help.